tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post506395059842525140..comments2023-10-10T06:51:30.363-07:00Comments on JHAROKHA: गज़ल पूनम श्रीवास्तवhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-73385641089848543312012-12-01T04:35:37.423-08:002012-12-01T04:35:37.423-08:00वाह वाह - अति सुंदर वाह वाह - अति सुंदर Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-54888898156680381522012-10-09T20:21:20.266-07:002012-10-09T20:21:20.266-07:00अपनी क़िस्मत कब बदलेगी,हम भी देते रब को ताने।
वाह...अपनी क़िस्मत कब बदलेगी,हम भी देते रब को ताने।<br /><br />वाह!पूनम जी.<br />क्या गजल लिखी है आपने.<br />आप सदा सुखी और स्वस्थ रहें यही मंगलकामना<br />करता हूँ,<br /><br />हारिये न हिम्मत बिसारिये न हरि नाम.Rakesh Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472849635889430725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-3992615092900548242012-10-01T23:22:37.658-07:002012-10-01T23:22:37.658-07:00सुंदर प्रस्तुति। मेरे नए पोस्ट "बहती गंगा&quo...सुंदर प्रस्तुति। मेरे नए पोस्ट "बहती गंगा" पर आप सादर आमंत्रित हैं। धन्यवाद।प्रेम सरोवरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17150324912108117630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-66017575584960885342012-09-21T18:31:02.726-07:002012-09-21T18:31:02.726-07:00बहुत ही अच्छा गजल। मेरे नए पोस्ट 'समय सरगम'...बहुत ही अच्छा गजल। मेरे नए पोस्ट 'समय सरगम' पर आपका इंतजार रहेगा।प्रेम सरोवरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17150324912108117630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-42404098384743523992012-09-21T01:56:45.145-07:002012-09-21T01:56:45.145-07:00तिनका तिनका जोड़ के इक दिन,पूरे हुये थे मेरे सपने
...तिनका तिनका जोड़ के इक दिन,पूरे हुये थे मेरे सपने<br />वक्त ने करवट ऐसी कुछ ली,अपने तिनके हुये बेगाने।<br /><br />,,,,आज का कटु सत्य..बहुत प्रभावी अभिव्यक्ति..Kailash Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12461785093868952476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-55733757855198864022012-09-20T08:32:41.550-07:002012-09-20T08:32:41.550-07:00jeevan ka raag hai ye ...
sundar rachna ...!!
shub...jeevan ka raag hai ye ...<br />sundar rachna ...!!<br />shubhkamnayen ..!!Anupama Tripathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478292826729436760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-20086299270610970792012-09-16T18:09:19.842-07:002012-09-16T18:09:19.842-07:00बहुत सुन्दर रचना बहुत सुन्दर रचना Vandana Ramasinghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01400483506434772550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-69022746907932226612012-09-16T06:08:15.319-07:002012-09-16T06:08:15.319-07:00बहुत ही बेहतरीन गजल...
:-)
बहुत ही बेहतरीन गजल...<br />:-)<br />मेरा मन पंछी साhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10176279210326491085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-35125326599033305412012-09-15T19:52:19.533-07:002012-09-15T19:52:19.533-07:00खाली बोतल जाम है खाली,बन्द पड़े सारे मयखाने
कष्ट ब...खाली बोतल जाम है खाली,बन्द पड़े सारे मयखाने<br />कष्ट बड़ा जीवन में है रब,टूट गये सारे पैमाने।<br /><br />सबकी देहरी घूम के देखा,सबके अपने हैं अफ़साने<br />दुख की घड़ियां गिनता कोई,कोई बुनता नये ठिकाने।<br /><br /><br />हवा यहां कुछ ऐसी बहकी,कोई अपने खून को ना पहचाने(खून ही अपना न पहचाने ?)लय भंग होती है यहाँ .प्रस्तुति बहुत आला दर्जे की है .<br />जान चुका था मै भी तब तक,निकले ही थे वो उड़ जाने।<br />virendra sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02192395730821008281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-74030723432545078112012-09-15T14:49:11.132-07:002012-09-15T14:49:11.132-07:00many-many thanks all of you for like my post.-----...many-many thanks all of you for like my post.------------------<br />poonamपूनम श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-48327702890634673202012-09-15T00:15:59.650-07:002012-09-15T00:15:59.650-07:00The post is very informative. 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हवा का नया झो...सूर्य की हर नयी किरण आस लेकर आती है,<br />हवा का नया झोंका अनुप्राणित कर जाता है।प्रवीण पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471375466909386690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4386048918231427711.post-7588212036989572952012-09-14T19:01:43.430-07:002012-09-14T19:01:43.430-07:00aap sabhi blogger bade janon avam chhoton se mai h...aap sabhi blogger bade janon avam chhoton se mai hardik -hardik xhama chahti hun ki aap logon ke poston ko padh kar main un parr chah kar bhi comments nahi de paati hun.<br />aasha haiaap sabhi meri sthiti ko jaan kar mujhe hriday se xhma karenge-------.<br /> meri saari posten is waqt mere<br />shrimaan ji hi dalten hain.<br /> bhaynkar sir dard v thayoride ke badhh jaane se ungliyon me kampan si hoti rahti hai.<br />mai bas kisi tarah rachnaayein likh ya bol deti hun .fir inko jab bhi mouka milta hai meri post dall dete hain.<br /> bavjud iske aap sabhi mere blog par aakar apne comments dete hain to bahut bahut hi achcha lagta hai.<br />isi tarah aap sabhi ke sneh v pyaar ki aakanxhi-------<br />punsch dil se aap sabki aabhaari-----poonamपूनम श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.com